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Femme Fatale

She's so beautiful, she makes me sick.  Just look at her with her long, blonde hair and her fantastic figure.
That's my boyfriend she's holding hands with, coming out of my house. That's my Ferrari they're walking towards.
Jesus, that's even my dress she's wearing!
Never mind, this is his rifle I'm looking through the telescopic sight of...

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17/08/06


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©2007-2009 ~IceDragon64
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Submitted: May 21, 2007
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This was my second 60 word story to be published. The perfect title was thought of by my secretary, Kim, who is what every author should have.

This one is one fo the sharper ones. My Newgrounds colleague Versucha is making an animation of it- I can't wait to see it!
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Congratulations on your second publication. While this story is nice, I enjoyed the first one more. It was filled with emotion and you could feel to be in the eyes of the woman staring down at her husbands grave. Anyhow looking forward to the third.
I have two more published 60 word stories which I will upload in due course, each a different style. This is four out of a total of over 50 sixty-word stories I have written so far.

If I keep writing enough stories I will one day try and get the lot published as a book!

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